asdkjnuev's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[One Sided Argument...]

lawl

"The girl WALKS funny!"

Besides the dialogue just making me laugh, it sounds like you have a pretty good handle on the lines and the last line couldn't be read more perfectly. However, I think your voice rises in pitch too much at the end of some of the questioning lines (but not all of them). From what I can tell you're supposed to be angry at the other character, not whiny. I'm looking forward to seeing this flash, good job!

ForNoReason responds:

Thanks for the critique and advice! I am working on the whiny thing. Ive noticed it in how I talk in day to day life and trying to cut it out cause it does ruin some things. Thanks again!

[Man I suck at song titles.]

sunday over easy

I think this sounds really pretty, it has a really nice tune to it. I don't think you should add drums, I think it's just right with the guitar/vocals.

As far as improvement goes -- the vocals are a little bit inconsistent in the volume and harmonizing department. Also, I'm not sure how I feel about the usage of the word "infantile," but it's really the only word that works and make sense/rhymes.

You have a nice voice, keep it up!

Strepitoso responds:

Yeah, that was definitely reaching far as lyrics go. My recording setup is a bit, ehm, shitty at the moment - I'll see what I can do to even out the vocals.

Edit: Thank you very much, by the way - my voice is one thing that terrifies me from a musical standpoint, haha.

[GSG - Missing The Point]

"wow!"

I think this really captures the negative stereotype hip-hop has acquired. The media further propagates this negative stereotype in the worst way possible -- rap and hip-hop are two very different things stemming from two very different American sub-cultures. Your commentary on society has earned you 5/5 & 10/10. The beat's killer, too :]

[Box Cutter - Mr Virus]

nice!

Not bad, it's easy to listen/chill to. However, I think it'd be even better if there was a little bit more variation throughout -- it gets repetitive quickly.

Good job!

SucoVidya responds:

If I had a good mic at home I would drop some verses on it.
I was freestyling to it and that is how i managed to get a feel for this beat, as raw as it is. It complements a rough layover of lyrics.

I'll bring it with me next time I hit the studio and update this with the vocals.

But yeah I concur, as I type this... very repetitive without hook samples/vocals.

[GSG - Willy Willy Wisp]

great job

I'm diggin' the beats, man. Keep it up.