asdkjnuev's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aer]

very nice!

I think this was put together quite nicely...around 0:46 the synth that comes in sounds like it cuts in too sharply, but when coupled with the piano it just sounds awesome.

Ham and gravy, man, 5/5 & 10/10 :]

NateTheGreatt responds:

Awesome! thank you so much bro :D

[Forward Momentum]

Frash-a-delic

This is some srs ham and gravy. Reminds me of Amplitude, /sigh, what a great game.

Keep it up!

EliteFerrex responds:

Heck yes! Amplitude was an amazing game! =D

[Inside the Monolith (loop)]

funky frash

/sigh, it was too long, actually.

I enjoy the epicness around 0:36.

Major gravy, five out of five.

masterjiji responds:

thx very mucho. expect more in this line of music.

[A Crimeless Classic]

hmm

I'm not sure I understand what's going on with all of the ambient noises and strangeness in general. I think it deserves a bit more cohesiveness than just randomness.

Also, I believe this is in the wrong genre...

MadCow responds:

It's ok. You're just too ignorant to understand.

[Take as many 5's as you want]

wack

Please go read yourself Strunk & White's Elements of Style book, it teaches you how to cohesively put together words from the English language into a proper sentence structure -- even for rhyming prose. Which you fail at miserably. In the words of the great Vast Aire, "if at first you don't succeed, try, try again." But this time, actually put some effort into it.

1/5 & 2/10, because this wasn't as bad as your MadWigged diss.

Broken-Needle responds:

lmfao 3 reviews already, no worries buddy im about 2 re-record this, I only put it up cuz I wanted sum sleep. I got home at 10 last night, didn't wanna disapoint u guys. At least you know vast aire=D

[Needle dick. BN Diss.]

lawl

Clearly you are the winner in this "battle," as if there even was anything to go up against. I feel like BN doesn't know the first thing about sentence structure; you, on the other hand, have a good grasp on how to flow and your lines are really clever.

I agree with GunstarGreene in that your lines feel a little bit rushed for the beats, but damn, good job.

4/5 & 9/10.

Madwigged responds:

Thanks man. I appreciate it.
I feel ya on the rushed lines.

[MadWigged diss]

wow

This is terrible. You sound like Ill Mitch, but worse. Much, much worse. The beat and the sample cuts don't sync AT ALL and your "rhymes" make absolutely zero sense. This belongs in the CIRCULAR FILE. Please, go read a dictionary and listen to some real hip-hop.

Broken-Needle responds:

lmfao, ok there if you say so

[Candy Zoo]

i think i have diabetes

The vocals are definitely awesome, well done :]

Kids songs aren't always the greatest, but just the concept of an actual Candy Zoo where you can eat the animals is wonderfully silly and awesome. I like it!

curriemaster responds:

Haha thanks a lot for the review man. I hereby vow to spread the happy plague of Type II diabetes to all children through the medium of brightly coloured sugar animals!

Cheers for the review :)

[One Sided Argument...]

lawl

"The girl WALKS funny!"

Besides the dialogue just making me laugh, it sounds like you have a pretty good handle on the lines and the last line couldn't be read more perfectly. However, I think your voice rises in pitch too much at the end of some of the questioning lines (but not all of them). From what I can tell you're supposed to be angry at the other character, not whiny. I'm looking forward to seeing this flash, good job!

ForNoReason responds:

Thanks for the critique and advice! I am working on the whiny thing. Ive noticed it in how I talk in day to day life and trying to cut it out cause it does ruin some things. Thanks again!

[Man I suck at song titles.]

sunday over easy

I think this sounds really pretty, it has a really nice tune to it. I don't think you should add drums, I think it's just right with the guitar/vocals.

As far as improvement goes -- the vocals are a little bit inconsistent in the volume and harmonizing department. Also, I'm not sure how I feel about the usage of the word "infantile," but it's really the only word that works and make sense/rhymes.

You have a nice voice, keep it up!

Strepitoso responds:

Yeah, that was definitely reaching far as lyrics go. My recording setup is a bit, ehm, shitty at the moment - I'll see what I can do to even out the vocals.

Edit: Thank you very much, by the way - my voice is one thing that terrifies me from a musical standpoint, haha.